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I see you standing by the stagnant creek,
Consoling yourself with things best unsaid,
I have never seen you look quite this weak.
Once you were full of life, now you are dead.
Your eyes are brown like the roots of the Earth,
I drowned in them and life was hard to see.
Being with you felt like a second birth,
But you let me go and fell to debris.
Now your eyes look like puddles in the rain,
So I am here to salvage what we had,
To love you until you walk with a cane,
And to make sure that you never feel sad.
Come and rectify the things you did wrong,
Because next to me is where you belong.
Consoling yourself with things best unsaid,
I have never seen you look quite this weak.
Once you were full of life, now you are dead.
Your eyes are brown like the roots of the Earth,
I drowned in them and life was hard to see.
Being with you felt like a second birth,
But you let me go and fell to debris.
Now your eyes look like puddles in the rain,
So I am here to salvage what we had,
To love you until you walk with a cane,
And to make sure that you never feel sad.
Come and rectify the things you did wrong,
Because next to me is where you belong.
This is a sonnet I had to write for my English class, as a mimic of Shakespeare. It had to be something about love, and it had to offer a proposal to whoever reads it.
If it wasn't obvious, this poem is written to my ex. Whom I still care about and always will care about, and all I ask is for him to feel the same way.
I hope you like it (:
If it wasn't obvious, this poem is written to my ex. Whom I still care about and always will care about, and all I ask is for him to feel the same way.
I hope you like it (:
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I thought it was lovely!
Good job. ^^
Good job. ^^